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Rewarded as a Traitor Deserves

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Raven of the Teen Titans scowled as she blasted her dark magic toward her opponent. That opponent was none other than Terra, who had joined the Teen Titans before being revealed as a spy for their archenemy Slade and betrayed them all.  Ever since then, the normaly emotionless Raven burned with the desire to inflict some justice on the devious blonde.  Now locked in combat in the middle of a lake, the two fierce rivals went at it with all the power they had, with Terra controlling the earth and attempting to crush Raven with it as she dodged the superheroine's magic blasts.

"You can't win, Raven!" Terra sneered, "You see this suit?"  The suit in question that Terra was wearing was one with an armored breastplade, special gloves and boots, and bandages wrapped all around her body. "This suit gives me double the power I usually have! And now I can control it perfectly!"

These cocky taunts forced Raven to struggle hard in keeping her own emotionally-driven powers in check, and she pushed back the boiling anger inside her as she replied "That suit won't save you forever, Terra!  It'll shut down!  It's only a matter of time...."

Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock....

Both combatants paused when, at the word "time", clock sounds filled the water.  Terra gave a nervous gulp of recognition. "Uh-oh..."

And then suddenly the girls found themselves being lifted into the air!  They gasped in horror as they looked down and saw that each of them was now standing between a row of teeth!  The crocodile of Neverland's head surfaced, a grin showing as he planned on chomping down on both these tasty-looking girls!  SNAP!

The crocodile was pleased as two distinct tastes filled his mouth. He remembered the taste of the caucasian one, which was the better taste of the two, but the gray one was no slouch either in this department!  He began to chew his prey before his jaws were forced open by a blast of dark magic.  Raven's cape was now tattered and her unitard full of holes, while Terra's bandages were beginning to unravel.  

Terra screamed and jumped out of the crocodile's maw, but a wave of dark magic pushed her back in as Raven jumped out herself.  "NO! Terra cried.  SNAP!  The crocodile closed his jaws back shut on the treacherous girl, licking his chops afterward.  He then swam after Raven, whose composure was slipping as she frantically attempted to get back to shore safely.

Just then, the earth on the lake's surface rose up and knocked Raven backward into the air. "WAAAAAAAH!" she screamed, landing in the open mouth of the crocodile while Terra slipped out, an evil grin on her face. SNAP!  "Enjoy being lunch, Raven!" she jeered as she began surfing on a mudslide to shore.

The crocodile swallowed Raven whole before swimming after Terra, snapping his jaws behind her.  The feisty blonde pressed forward and it looked like she was going to make it when suddenly a claw made of black energy shot out of the crocodile's mouth and grabbed firmly onto Terra's leg. Terra screamed and was pulled down the crocodile's throat. SNAP!

For a while, the crocodile lay in the water rubbing his belly.  Then Raven and Terra popped back up out of his mouth again, shoving against each other as they fought to get free.  At last, Raven managed to slide out into the water and quickly scrambled to shore. Her outfit was torn up and most of it was gone, but she was safe. Which was more than could be said for the traitorous Terra!

Legs stretched out between the crocodile's jaws to prevent falling in, Terra began to shake in fear as she felt the jaws trying to creak back close. "SLAAAAADE!!!" she screamed, not realizing that her suit's communication system had been broken. SNAP! SNAP! The crocodile started to scizzor Terra, who continued screaming "SLAAAAADE!!!"

Raven was delighted to see Terra get what she had coming to her and began to laugh. She wasn't even worried about her powers going out of control, she needed this! Hearing Raven's throaty laughter made Terra start crying tears of humiliation as she tried with all her might to resist the crocodile's scizzor maneuver, the bandages on her body continually unraveling with each chomp.

"SLAAAAAAAAAAAADE! SLAAAAAAAAAAAADE! SLA-!"  WHAM!  Terra's fear had driven her own powers out of control, and a rock landed right on her head, forcing her down the crocodile's gullet!  SNAP!  Raven began laughing so hard that tears gushed from her eyes as she rolled around on the ground.

When Terra burst back out of the reptile's maw, she managed to jump into the water, swimming blindly as she shrieked "SLAAAAAAAAAAAAAADE!!!"  SNAP! The crocodile bit down on a loose bandage and began sucking it into his mouth like a strand of spaghetti, Terra's whole body being pulled along with it!

"HEEEEEEEEEEEELP!!!" Terra screamed as she was pulled back into the crocodile's mouth and back down into his stomach. SNAP!  The crocodile belched before licking his chops happily at the taste that filled his tummy, all while Raven was choking on her own laughter as she pounded the ground with her fist.

As the crocodile swam away into the distance, Terra's voice could still be heard inside him, calling out "GET ME OUTTA HERE! WHY WON'T THIS THING WORK? HELP ME! SLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADE!!!"  "I told her it wouldn't save her forever!" Raven gleefully remarked before resuming laughing her gray butt off.  Justice tasted as good to her as Terra did to the crocodile!
Raven and Terra battle it out until an unexpected third party enters the fray: the crocodile!

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swaggersouls68's avatar

I hoped the croc would have gotten Raven