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Chel and the Croc

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Bare feet struck the wet, hard ground of the riverside, running at a breakneck pace. They belonged to a scantily-clad teenage girl named Chel, a denizen of El Dorado who had joined two outsiders named Miguel and Tulio in a life of crime. Now she found herself running to escape a theft she had bungled, retreating into the jungle area she thought she was safe in.

"W-woah!" Suddenly the little vixen found herself slipping against the rocky surface.  She almost fell into the water, but managed to stop herself by putting a hand down on the ground which kept her body still and balanced. Chel, leaning downward, breathed a sigh of relief. But it was a premature one.

Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock....

Chel's head slowly lifted upward, her eyes filled with alarm. She had heard tales of an enormous crocodile with a clock in his belly, but hadn't believed them. But now, to her horror, a 27-feet long reptile emerged from the water and sat upon the rock directly opposite her, a wide toothy grin on his face.

The crocodile winked at Chel as he began rubbing his belly and licking his chops thoroughly. This caused Chel to give a nervous gulp, sweat trickling down her forehead as she slowly struggled to get to her feet and leave as quickly as possible. But when she did, she looked ahead to see that the crocodile had disappeared! "Wh-what the hey?"

And then two huge jaws, each with a row of pointy teeth, burst out from the water and closed in around the rock Chel was standing on! "OH MY GODS!" Chel shrieked in horror.

SNAP! The rock crumbled and it's pieces tumbled down the crocodile's throat. Chel's bare feet now stood directly on each end of the beast's jaws, which were wide open and ready to swallow her whole. In a panic, Chel screamed out "TULIOOOOOOOOO!", hoping her love was around nearby to hear her.

Chel screamed when she felt the jaws of the crocodile close and open beneath her toes, scizzoring her around like crazy. SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! SNAP! The slender girl began to flail her arms in the air, lifting one leg up at a time alternatively while hollering "TULIOOOOOOOOO! TUUUUUULIOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

After a while of this, the crocodile finally managed to bite down on one of Chel's big toes. "YOWHOOOW!" Chel shrieked, slipping from her position and falling right down onto the crocodile's large pink tongue. She was busy rubbing her foot until she noticed the jaws closing in on her and frantically pressed her hands against them to keep them still, wincing at the creaking sound they made against her body.

Wobbling, Chel attempted to stand back up inside the beast's maw while still pushing hard against his jaws. But as she did, her loincloth got caught on one of his teeth and half of it was torn clean off, falling into the crocodile's stomach and filling it with her taste. This excited him so much that his jaws found the strength to close in on Chel completely! SNAP!

The crocodile smiled in satisfaction, the wonderful taste of Chel's light brown skin bouncing around in his mouth. Chel then kicked the top jaw of the reptile open and shrieked "TUUUUULIOOOOOOOOOO!!!"

Chel soumersalted to her feet and grabbed the top jaw, hoping to lift herself up it and climb out to safety. But the crocodile slyly grinned and swiped his tongue against the girl's bare soles, making her began to twitch and laugh hysterically. Chel couldn't think straight as she felt all her toes getting licked and tickled, and she involuntarily let go of the jaw and plummeted straight down the beast's awaiting throat. SNAP!

For a few minutes, the crocodile swam along, happy with Chel in his belly. But then the sexy El Doradian jumped right out of his mouth, most of what little clothing she wore in tatters and exposing even more of her skin, screaming "HEEEEEEEELP! TULIOOOOOOOO!!!"

SNAP! "WAAAAAAAAAH!" Chel screamed, tears gushing from her eyes, as the crocodile bit down on her soft rear end. The seat of her skirt was torn off and Chel landed in the water, rubbing at her red-sore butt as she sunk beneath the surface. The crocodile took his time chewing the fabric of Chel's loincloth before swallowing it and swimming underwater himself, ready for more.

The crocodile soon burst back out of the water, Chel in his mouth and screaming her head off. No help would come any time soon, and the crocodile wasn't ready to give up his pursuit of this girl either. To him, her taste was as good as gold!
Chel never should have left El Dorado!

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If this one had a preview picture, I no longer see it.