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Ben's Revenge

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Ben Tennyson was frustrated. He had just defeated 9 of the evil Negative 10. The silver-haired teenage sorceress Charmcaster was the only one left, and just when Ben was about to turn into an alien to kick her butt, his cousin Gwen entered the fray instead. Hands glowing blue with her own magic, she remarked "Charmcaster is MY enemy! Back off and leave her to me, you ultra-dork!"

The heroic 10-year old boy sat by the riverside, fuming as the sound of clashing spells rang out behind him.  "Man, Gwen always spoils my good time!" he complained aloud, "I wish there was some way I could get her back for this!"

Tick Tock, Tick Tock, Tick Tock...

Hearing the sound of a clock, Ben turned to the water and saw an enormous crocodile slowly swimming along.  It was the crocodile of Neverland, following Charmcaster in hopes of getting the delicious witch back in his belly.  A wide, mischievous grin spread across Ben's face.  He had an idea!

"Hey, Mr. Crocodile!" Ben called out, "Still after that yummy tangfish?"  The crocodile grinned back at Ben, nodding his head and licking his lips happily.

"Do you want me to get her for you?"  The crocodile nodded faster.

"Do you want to try a side of red herring with that?"  The crocodile's nodding sped up.

"OK!" Ben said, delighted as he slammed a hand down on his Omnitrix, "Going hero!"  With a flash of green light, Ben turned into the alien Stinkfly.  Without delay, he spurted a stream of goop across the ground, right where the clashing young witches were about to step!

"WOOOAAAH!" Gwen and Charmcaster began to skid and slide across the ground when their feet touched the goop, with Stinkfly laughing as he sailed above them.  "Ben, what-!?" Gwen began, before she heard the ticking and saw the crocodile in the water they were sliding toward, his mouth opening wide!

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAEEEEEEEEE!!!" Charmcaster shrieked as high as she could, while Gwen shot a horrified and infuriated glare at her cousin, who had reverted back to human form and was waving the girls goodbye. "Later, dweeb!" he called, leaving Gwen speechless with rage.

Charmcaster seized the moment and swung a leg at her rival, kicking her straight toward the crocodile. Gwen screamed as she slid right into the reptile's maw.  SNAP! Ben broke out into hysterical laughter, and Charmcaster did the same before crashing into the river with a splash.

The crocodile grinned. It was no tangfish, but he liked the taste of red herring just fine! Then Gwen pushed his jaws apart, hair unclipped and her shirt full of holes, and hollered "BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!" This just made Ben's laughing fit even worse, and he clutched his sides while holding back tears.

Gwen was holding back tears of her own as she struggled to keep the beast's jaws from closing. Just then, Charmcaster resurfaced, sputtering as she wiped her wet hair out of her face. The crocodile smacked his lips upon seeing her, which bumped Gwen up and down in his mouth, and then began swimming straight toward her!

"WAAAAAAH!" the criminal girl shrieked, and began swimming away as fast as she could.  SNAP! SNAP! The crocodile snapped his jaws at Charmcaster repeatedly, which banged the shouting Gwen around inside them even more. Ben couldn't hold back any more, and tears of hilarity gushed from his eyes like fountains.

Charmcaster cried out the levitation spell and was lifted into the air. But her power had been depleted in the battle with Gwen and she could only hang just a few inches above the crocodile!  Spitting Gwen out into the water, the crocodile eagerly began jumping up at Charmcaster, snapping at her heels. SNAP! SNAP!

Ben laughed and cheered as the crocodile started biting off shreds of Charmcaster's clothing, punctuated each time by a scream from the villainess.  "Yeah! Get her, Croc!" he called. Noticing Gwen resurface, he then added "But don't let the herring escape!"

The crocodile wrapped his tail around Gwen, holding her still as she kicked her legs in the water uselessly. "BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!" she screamed in anger, making Ben double over with laughter. To see Gwen so humiliated was a dream come true!

Soon the levitation spell wore off, and Charmcaster shrieked as she fell toward the crocodile.  Letting go of Gwen and pushing her aside, the crocodile opened his mouth and caught Charmcaster in it.  SNAP!  Gwen began swimming away again, but the crocodile's tail reappeared in front of her. WHAM!

The redhead was sent flying into the air, tears gushing from her eyes as she screamed, and landed right in the crocodile's mouth!  SNAP!  Ben fell to the ground, rolling around as he laughed uproariously. This was too perfect: the crocodile could now munch on both annoying girls at the same time!

After a while of chewing, the crocodile's jaws were lifted up by Gwen and Charmcaster, both of whom were half-naked.  "BEEEEEEEEEN!!!" they screamed in unison.  "Sorry, losers!" Ben replied, sticking his tongue out, "I'm all hero'd out for today!"  

Both girls' eyes welled up with angry tears at Ben's reply and his further chortling, with Gwen shouting "I'M TELLING GRANDPA ON YOU, YOU DWEEB!"

SNAP! The crocodile slammed his jaws shut on his victims again and gave a mighty gulp. Two shapes could be seen from the outside of his throat, travelling down to his stomach. The giant reptile belched, making Ben wet his pants with laughter as he said "Whose the dweeb here, croc chow? Bahahahahahahahaaa!"

Inside the crocodile's stomach, Charmcaster turned to Gwen frantically.  "We have no other choice!" she declared, "We have to combine magics!"  Gwen raised an eyebrow. "Isn't that advised against?"  "SCREW THAT, I DON'T WANNA BE DINNER!" Charmcaster whined, blasting a magic bolt at Gwen and forcing her to instinctively blast back, causing the magics to combine.

BOOM! The crocodile's stomach bulged before Gwen and Charmcaster both shot out of his mouth in a spew of smoke, now only wearing their underpants.  Gwen landed with a thud on land, knocked unconscious.  Like usual, Charmcaster was not so lucky, and only landed further away in the river.

When the witch resurfaced and parted her wet silver hair, she saw the crocodile head straight toward her, licking his chops for more tangfish!  "NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" Charmcaster shrieked, and the last Ben saw of her, she was dashing across the water, the hungry crocodile hot on her heels!

"See ya, Lamecaster!" Ben jeered before falling back to the ground, laughing until he was gasping for breath.  Gwen regained consciousness for a brief second and groaned "You...little...dweeb..." before she was out again.  When later asked what his fondest memory of summer vacation was, Ben never had to think twice for the answer!
Ben Tennyson gets to humiliate his annoying cousin Gwen and the evil Charmcaster both at once!  What more could a mischief-loving 10-year old hero ask for?

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Sometimes ten-year old Gwen could so horrible she kind of deserved this and of course Charmcaster is traditionally the butt monkey.  And after a session with the crocodile probably a very butt-hurt monkey.